The ending of Steal Moon really bothered me. I thought Yellow was a lot more wrapped up than that, even though Sandfish were still free, but at least Mizuki finally realized she had no chance with Taki and Katsuro seemed to "approve" Goh and Taki's relationship.
Steal Moon's pacing was really off. The first volume was okay, but in the second, it was one plot twist after another (and sometimes more than one in a chapter even.) It's part of what were talking about before, how Ratri and Kai are more interesting than Coyote and Nozomi because of their obvious, if not included, depth. I think if she fleshed out the characters more and made it into a slightly longer story, Steal Moon's ending would've felt a lot better. To me, it felt... ended. Not finished or wrapped up.
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Date: 2008-08-25 11:58 pm (UTC)Steal Moon's pacing was really off. The first volume was okay, but in the second, it was one plot twist after another (and sometimes more than one in a chapter even.) It's part of what were talking about before, how Ratri and Kai are more interesting than Coyote and Nozomi because of their obvious, if not included, depth. I think if she fleshed out the characters more and made it into a slightly longer story, Steal Moon's ending would've felt a lot better. To me, it felt... ended. Not finished or wrapped up.